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The War Of Glory

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قديمة 12-28-2005, 04:14 PM   #1
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تاريخ التسجيل : Aug 2005
رقم العضوية : 38459
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المستوى : bu7ma1d نشيط جداً
الجنس: الجنس: male
علم الدولة: علم الدولة United Arab Emirates
غير متصل: bu7ma1d غير متواجد حاليآ بالمنتدى
إفتراضي The War Of Glory

The War Of Glory

By Abdullah Saud AlHumaidan

In summer year 239B.C a simple guy in the street walking doesn’t know what was going to happen to him. Suddenly, a poison arrow hits his leg but who did it? And why did someone kill him? While the days pass he felt more pain and got sick of the poison arrow, but is there someone to take revenge? Yes his only young brother he was 10 years old from the day he saw his brother dieing he held his big brother hand and said “days pass as the wind takes me to the murderer.” his big brother start feeling happy that he did what he should do after the death of his mother and father he raised his brother to be a man from his young and have power and dignity of holding responsibility.
The young brother holding his brother hand feeling the pain that his brother feel and holding the pain of his brother and saying (patience, the pain is what build a man) and left his brother arm who died of a horrible death and run out to start his training to the day of his search for the murderer.
Years later the small boy has grown up and became 22 years old and his name was Erico.
He was a poor man spent all his money for training and gather information about any murderers he can inspect them he started east of Rome till the west searching by his feet till he met a guy that made him so happy he was 20 years older he was like a father to him.
what he was searching for but while the days pass Erico found a torn page written on it his brother name repeatedly he felt so strange, days pass as his relation with the old man was increasing as he started to call him father.
He went into wars, battles, fights and never been defeated.
One day in the summer the old man ordered Erico to assassinate the ambassador of England Erico was feeling sad as he new that he was living with an murderer Erico refused to do the job and the old man was saying to him (That how u repay me after the years I served you like a father!) Erico started to shout at him till he asked him about his killings and the people he killed.
The old man refused to answer Erico question at the first place and then he told him about it and he new that he was the killer of his brother!
Erico standup and held his sword and started a fight with the old man till he killed him.
The soldiers herd the swords crossing each other till the arrived and saw the old man killed and blamed Erico that he is a thief and got in to steal something.
Erico was judged to be hanged the second day.

Sad Ending:
Erico was brave as he wasent afraid of the execution
As he forfilled his revenge and he knows that his brother is proud of him.
The next day Erico was hanged and cut ten to pieces and never been buried as his body was fed to the lions in the coliseum.

Happy Ending:
Erico managed to escape the prison by the help of his trusty friends that new that he killed him for a reason
And lived in the Scot lands and new that his brother is proud of him and started a family and had a son and named him Galisious the name of his brother.
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قديمة 01-02-2006, 05:08 PM   #2
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تاريخ التسجيل : Jul 2004
رقم العضوية : 17808
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المستوى التعليمي : جامعي
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المستوى : أميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريمأميرة الغروب يستحق التكريم
الجنس: الجنس: female
علم الدولة: علم الدولة Germany
غير متصل: أميرة الغروب غير متواجد حاليآ بالمنتدى
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nice story brother
but I think that there's something I couldn't understand
اقتباس:
Sad Ending
Erico was brave as he wasent afraid of the execution
As he forfilled his revenge and he knows that his brother is proud of him.
The next day Erico was hanged and cut ten to pieces and never been buried as his body was fed to the lions in the coliseum.

Happy Ending:
Erico managed to escape the prison by the help of his trusty friends that new that he killed him for a reason
And lived in the Scot lands and new that his brother is proud of him and started a family and had a son and named him Galisious the name of his brother.
!!!how come
looool








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قديمة 01-22-2006, 02:10 AM   #3
إضغط هنا لإخفاء أو عرض بيانات العضوبيانات العضو
تاريخ التسجيل : Aug 2005
رقم العضوية : 39114
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الجنس: الجنس: female
علم الدولة: علم الدولة Kuwait
غير متصل: p8oJl غير متواجد حاليآ بالمنتدى
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Nice story

I loved it and loved how you put 2 endings insted of only one


I prefer the happy ending


and they lived happily ever after

thanks for sharing the story with us










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