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09-28-2006, 12:39 AM
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:: Enter & judge ::
hi every body
 how are you !! I wish fine  It my first participation in the English section & You know I wanna every body read my shy and simple prosaic from what I had written in my early start but please don't laugh when read it ,as what I said it's simple * (it's my first writing in English language)  I appeal 4 every body enter my subject, judge my writing because Iam very enthusiastic to read your criticize... لأني بصراحه نزلتها بكذا منتدى وجاني إحباط مافيه أحد يرد أو يهتم ...  so please friend dont let me down ................................ CRYING Searching through the seas Looking among the skies Waiting a small shine smile guide me to my life But … Where to begin is the biggest problem of mine No one can walk without his heart So… Get back for me To help me to go through the dark And get back to my fancy life Without you I can't open my eyes To see how beautiful is the fall of the down This cold winds touching my heart The forgotten part of it Reminds me of the best times we spent together Opening your heart for such a girl Even without knowing The truth of mine This will be the last call for you I hope you can read it in your heart And close your eyes You will find me waiting for you I want to know who you are Before… I get die… So if you want to know me Come… To the darkest side And search about The dead body of mine ـــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ THE ALONLY VOICE Screaming in the dead night Without any sound Shouting in my small heart Why? Why? I found my true happiness with you So… don’t leave me alone Crying in my highest voice I love you ………………. No one here me but you I hope my a lonely voice will reach you Through every where in this land When ever I close my eyes I see your Smile with no sad nor pain Walking on a rain bow with no one See us even if they are near to us Time to go is approaching …. Tears fall from my eyes Your words make me cry even more Than before … I'll be waiting the next night To see you again Looking towards the stars Seeing your smile Touching my heart deeply inside ـــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ DARK I hear the winds whisper in your name in every where, I since you, I feel your hand touching mine , I feel your arms hold me tight and closing me to your heart, Dancing together in the moon light, Flaying in our dreams, Leading to no certain place, We go with the winds melodies, Deeper and deeper than every thing our love lies there, You don’t have to say a word because your eyes express about what's inside your heart, The sun light separates us Each one of us goes in his way Tell the next night come, The last thing I remember Is your back while you left me behind…, Alone, in the dark But… I will wait… Your name is dark and you appear only in the dark, when I'm with you I forget about pain, lonely and sorrow, I have just one wish in this life and it's to never leave me, I can't live without you any more ــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ The swains silent We have made the eternal treaty of love First it was a haply You’ve entered my life as a foreign You kept gloating at me in the gloom You’ve penetrated my heart and signed your name in it In a look I became your prisoner I started to soar in my dreams A look, a whisper and a touch of maternity I couldn’t let that happen I should stop here I can't allow to continue in this Now I can't imagine my life without you …even if your far away I can feel you your heart your love toward me But …. I know am asking too much but I want to see you to know you before leaving this life Then I sow you approaching from me with a rose in your hand with your face blushed you want me to accept it from you … You start to mumble in some words I smiled and took it in my volition Then you ran you went to another attitude You’ve fade in the aerosol I thought all that was from my fancy But I sow the rose between my hands, so it was real I sat on a swing …. Playing in my lyre You keep me thinking about you Who are you?? From where?? When?? And why you've come to my life ... I felt like knowing you from the past You seem to be full with vagueness Then I sow you in front of me I didn’t know what to say and you kept silent then your lips have finally moved you asked me if you can set I didn’t say any thing but you've understand my eyes saying yes with a smile hidden behind and we kept silence even you can hear the water splash so loudly You were the one to cut the cuffs on my heart You've melt me with your mildness You've never moved your sight away from me You hold my hand You were the one to change my look to this world … You’ve swear And you have to fulfill your promises A promise of loyalty You’ve put your hands around my waist I could do nothing but surrounding my self To whom…. To some one who will never leave my side, some one who will share me his feeling "sad or glad happy or angry" every thing that he can feel To you … the first and the only in my life To you dark… My love …my heart I don't want to wake up from my dream I want you beside me, with me in every step I make Tell the end…. Together beyond dreams ــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ best regards u'r sis shatha |
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09-28-2006, 11:17 AM
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Very nice sister.........did you write all of them? always share this talent with us........you have my full support, and i'm sure most members will say the same.
and i liked "DARK" the most thank you
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09-28-2006, 06:13 PM
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اقتباس:
yes ,I've write it in my early start اقتباس:
really u made me so happy bcz of u'r lovely words  I promse u I'II keep it up , and once I write a new thing , u'r the one who is ganna see it and judge it my dear ... And about DARK , I think it reflect my feelings while I write it also It pictured those moments in my mind Which really affected me & teared my eyes << just point of view Thanks againe dear jana for getting by me I wish you the endless happiness in your life GOD BLESS U u'r sis shatha
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09-28-2006, 09:15 PM
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thanks very nice
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09-29-2006, 03:10 AM
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Hi Sis
wonderful poems as jane said you have talent and we will support you i like Dark and crying whisper if you post one poem i think it will be better than a group of poems keep going daffodil |
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09-29-2006, 06:18 PM
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darlings
HappyGirl daffodil thank u so much sweeties 4 getting by me & 4 u'r nice words... dear daffodil اقتباس:
thanks againe dear daffodil GOD BLESS U u'r sis shatha
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09-29-2006, 06:44 PM
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Thank you
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09-29-2006, 11:37 PM
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HEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYY SIS MASHALLA 3NDK MAWHEBA KEEEEP IT UP 'N REMEMBER A GIFT MUST BE POLISHED
 ciaaaaaaaaaaoKEEEEEEEP SMILIN |
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09-29-2006, 11:50 PM
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dear bro
ابوفهد5 thank u 4 getting by me sweety KEEP SMILIN thank u dear 4 u'r lovely praise & thank u 4 getting by me thanks againe GOD BLESS U u'r sis shatha
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09-30-2006, 03:30 AM
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ANY TIME WALAAAAW
 O I'M WAITIN FOR MORE POEMS KEEEEEP SMILIN |
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