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08-24-2007, 12:28 AM
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One day
A message for Someone, so special to me , so close and so far ....... To my ======= One day , when I need you I hope you would be there Just for me as always I wished as always you did supporting me ,,,, One day, when I feel so bad when I feel so sad when no one sees my tears I hope you would be there Holding my hands Wiping my tears Just for me ,,,, One day When my chest refuses my heart When my heart resists my feelings beating so strong And so soft I wish you would be there On my side Just for me Would you be there for me? Ever and forever My beloved brother Missing you
Your older, little sister
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08-25-2007, 04:28 AM
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my sis 7eber wa warq I really apprecaited your feeling towards your brother and I present my respect to your brother who make you feel like that what abeautiful thing when we can express our feeling to our brother MASHA ALLAH and i liked your poem it's well written and it decorates with fancy esp. these words اقتباس:
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08-25-2007, 08:16 AM
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Very beautiful
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08-25-2007, 06:14 PM
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nice writing
i like these lines so much One day When my chest refuses my heart When my heart resists my feelings I wish you all the best willing to read more for you
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08-27-2007, 05:39 AM
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salam alukiem sister ink and paper
brothers and sisters are the awsome relationships in the world i believe that loosing a bro or sis means lose a lot cause it's hard to find some like them and it comes out that you're a good writer mashallah wish you the best and see more of ur awsome topics here take care ur bro bundy
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08-29-2007, 10:30 AM
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Outstanding
beautifuly expressed words well written and organized may allah bless all your loved once soul inky : did you write it also in arabic...or maybe i'm just having another daja vu 
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09-01-2007, 05:20 AM
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. welcome back 7eber ,, I am glad to see you again this time I saw you differently I saw your innocence and your childish hopes I touched the most beautiful thing inside person which is brotherhood 's love I liked your tone in the poem It makes me feel that you are still a child appealing to her brother to be with her to wipe her tears and to hold her hands I also I want to say that I liked these words very much اقتباس:
looking forward more With my best regards
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09-01-2007, 06:23 AM
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;-)Thanks sis, beautiful Poem, I think you are poet, Right
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09-01-2007, 02:27 PM
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FUL OF FEELINGS
God bless you 7eber i can smell your feelings burning up from each single word Congratulations 7eber`s bro you`ve gotten such a sister |
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09-05-2007, 07:23 PM
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اقتباس:
Good evening all وجوه My sister I am really happy you liked my writting and my week attempt in expressing my feelings toward my brother Thanks for your support sis I appreciate your feelings My regards
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