Today I Saw a Butterfly

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Today I saw a butterfly,
as it floated in the air;
Its wings were spread in splendor,
Unaware that I was there.
It was such a thing of beauty,
It was a sight to see;
It was the perfect masterpiece,
Full of grace and majesty.

I found myself thinking,
to what can this compare?
And then, of course, I thought of you,
And I wished that you were there.

God sure was extra careful,
When He formed and fashioned you;
You too, became a masterpiece,
Yet God is still not through.

He's daily making changes,
that other folks can't see;
You're already true perfection,
At least you are to me.

bundy

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salam alukiem brother

I thank you for your opinion

and I hope that you will involve in the vote

thanks

BrAv3_h3ArT

bundy

sister.. you don't have to thank me

because i didn't do anything and i voted for you

don't worry

Rose Of Hope

hey lil sis شهيدة

nice poem ,yet it needs a little polishing in terms of coherency. Other than that, its totally perfect^-^

Adios.

Rose

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ROSE of Hope & Brave heart

I wanted to use the poem in an occasion and I added here to listen to your voices

Thank you all for your opinion

and thank you for your voices

sorry for any spelling mistake It was in hurry when I wore it

your sister شهيدة

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Nice poems, I liked it so much

Takes the mind into a flight of perceived perfection of one's true love, doesn't it

If this is not one of your own wordings, then I hope to see more of your own poems

Rregards

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Hi

طواشthank you Mr

please don't forget to vote

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thanx alot