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07-24-2008, 06:22 PM
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.::][ WISHES ][::.
hello every body
i'm glad to be here and it's great to put the first thread  this is one of my writing i hope you like it with all my wishes  ============= Baby, Every day I want to stay in your heart. Want to whisper on your ears. Want to sleep in your lap. Want to dream you as a tart. My soul is calling you, "you are a part Of my heart". Honey, inside of you, I felt that Love is true. One day, I may pass through. But you know, You will stay My great ray. And I'll always still say: "I love you" ============= EIMOO |
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07-24-2008, 06:30 PM
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Salam alukiem brother EIMOO
first of all, welcome to the english section and i'm happy to be the first one who replied at you well, you expressed your feeling so well to her and it's clear that you're inlove with her so much because you wrote for her a nice poem glad to see your work here and waiting for more take care
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07-25-2008, 05:28 AM
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thnx for pass dear brother
i'm glad you like my little poem .. by the way .. she deserve more than what i wrote but what can i do more?? the words and feeling stop when thinking of her thank you again .. and enshallah i'll be always right here good luck |
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07-25-2008, 08:37 AM
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Hey EIMOO Nice try^^ I get the overall idea of your poem,however, I think your choice of words is a little awkward. For example, when you say " dream you as a tart", you could have said " see you in my dreams every night". I understand that writing a poem in English may not be easy yet I admire you for giving it a try. Best of Luck, Rose
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07-25-2008, 12:27 PM
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Welcome to the English forum sister, you set your foot in the right direction
The English forum is graced to have such talents indeed Keep up churning out the good gems Regards
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07-25-2008, 05:54 PM
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hi dear sister
.::[ ROSE ]::. i know i know i'm just a beginner in this field it's not a poem by the real meaning of poem but it's an experiment to sort up the words in anacceptable style i'm glad you right to me a notice i hope to see you more and more in my future threads thanks a lot |
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07-25-2008, 05:56 PM
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hi dear brother ..
i'm glad to see you here your words are a stimulant to me to write more thnx for pass |
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07-25-2008, 08:48 PM
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thanx alot
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07-26-2008, 02:28 AM
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thnx for pass
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07-26-2008, 01:26 PM
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بِسْمِ اللهِ الرَّحْمَنِ الرِّحِيْم
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LOVE is true it is a fact that nobody can live without love Love is part our human life, If you want live you have love No life without LOVE . . Touching words, meaningful style brother So, We have got a genius in our section LoooooL If work hard you can make it better and better Thanks a lot :: EIMOO And welcome in our English section in the forum Take care / \ | BRAVE HEART
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