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01-03-2010, 08:22 PM
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four-letters word
Tears in sluggish streams As steps crossed the old time And traveled the years without a goal, Seas Do not have beaches Hovering around a small island Restricted under siege, Reeling from grief and crying in pain, Alone Embrace of thorns and the nails to her chest, Trying to penetrate the ribs to kill pulses In order to silence the whispers Call voices from time to time and the other, Surrounded by concerns, And encircled by dark everywhere, Put her hand on her ear Shut, possibly the echo separation Echo leave treacherous, Speak loudly Cry more and more and more, Running in all directions Hugging black in all stations, Tired Those Inflicted upon itself, I stood looking at her feet, Look at her hands, What a hard hands !! What most scars, Penetrated her skin without permission and colonized forever All this for what? For the word of all she kidnapped ambitions Dreams Expectations From the likes of Magic word Even Satanic Mantra Terrorizes the soul, kills life Word Open secrets of the female Interference by about its stronghold Look at the clothes dignity shattered And groping her own scarf honor, blood, And looking for women between rocks harsh surroundings, And trampling barefoot on thorns loss fatal "No life" scream, "I do not die," delirious, Hovering around the same Blind eyes to perhaps escape Maybe it sped away from the perimeter Black Arctic, Poor Is poor Is an orphan Oppressed Captive Restricted Tied Shackles of hate And chains of hatred hugging her neck, Holding the heart How much you hate her? How detest me? How dark is it? How desperate are they? Running, shooting in all directions blind do not see anything And trample more and more on thorns cursed Implanted in a vein of blood Outbreak of the arteries of femininity, Running and panting Thirsty candles melted into droplets, Hungry to papers bitter, What a woman, The four-letters word Was executed Was imprisoned Was recorded Led to the isthmus does not live or die, Crying blood, Running on that island and a single Contact trampled the shattered black Arctic Ocean, What a stupid What a stupid, I believed him hugged him Loved, Sacrificed for him I worked for his heart, Left her To the word of four characters, What a woman, Sad Depressed Too pre-occupied Anxious Stabbed Unpleasant Nasty Repulsion Ugly Only that it had ratified the word The four-letters Your brother Khaled Ahmed Sizzle (do not accuse love, but accused of exploit it) I'm BACK 
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01-04-2010, 11:18 PM
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thank you for the lovely poem
 it has some mistakes though and welcome back |
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01-07-2010, 03:38 PM
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welcome back *_^
WooooooooooooooW So touching & so rhetorical words What a painful image you pictured for a woman's soul slaughtered by the four-letter word No doubt, you've greatly succeeded, but …..0 I wonder how you would describe a man's heart offended by the four-letter word Thanks a lot bro for sharing the whispers of your letters with us اقتباس:
welcome back & plz be always around  ever 
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01-10-2010, 07:25 PM
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badi
thank you for you visiting and for mistakes I will try to do my best next time yours kaled ahmed whisper "who is perfect ? "
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01-10-2010, 07:28 PM
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everlasting spr
Your visit is something help my pen to recognize that there still hearts fell the truth behinds the words with all thanks khaled ahmed whisper "I'm waiting for a women to do what you asked for , one day she will"
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01-10-2010, 07:30 PM
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thanks brother wish you all the best and wish my pen all the truth yours khaled ahmed whisper "i will do all i can to be always as you want to be , the best"
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07-19-2010, 12:09 PM
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i always wondered how do people makes art out of words in arabic
now I am impressed by those people ....... and in english !! WONDERFUL ART BROTHER ........ TABARAK ALLAH*
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07-21-2010, 09:25 AM
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Thanks for your writing really this poem are worth. Toward for the best writing.
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01-17-2011, 08:28 PM
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Jsut 3 words , AMAZING , TOUCHING AND BRILLIANT !
simply the describtion is perfect keep it up |
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