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01-28-2010, 03:24 PM
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All right, I'm glad my story appealed to you at the beginning, but can you let me know of your overall opinions
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01-28-2010, 03:53 PM
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i enjoyed reading it
but the ending seemed a bit too perfect for me i expected ali to scream in rage and disagree with khalid i guess i watch too many khalejee series eh boss 
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01-31-2010, 01:39 AM
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Peace be upon you all Big Boss Thank you very much for your short story I hope that your next story be longer so you can write freely because as you mentioned that you wrote this story for your friend for specific purpose... .I think that limit you in writing....... The finale is unexpected because I was waiting for more principles of creative leadership and for more problems and solutions.... Thank you very much because you enrich my vocabulary with new words I wish you all the best ..........IRIS......... |
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02-01-2010, 02:54 PM
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Thanks for passing by sister
Just to be technically correct, a story cannot be longer than this, because it will then become a novel. There is a huge difference between a novel and a story As a matter of fact, my friend asked for a shorter story than this, but being a writer with long breath, I always fail in writing a short and compact story; this is not my field Just to let you know, I'm a novelist and have published two novels so far You can find out more about it by visintg my website Regards
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