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09-29-2010, 05:34 PM
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A poem by Me
Hello everyone
How R U all ?! Anyway, i've just made a poem when i was boring So, i'd like to show it to U all Here it is Do U know what's the diffrent between me and you Because i donno if you've got a mind or no And that's mean you're so crazy Then you'll do whatever you want immediatly But the problems getting through And i donno if i'll put a solve Then suddenly, you found me again Then i've run as fast as i can And i found that you were a guy Trying to make your shoes tied After you've brought your blade You look like so glad After i've been killed The results weren't pleasure Like a big family in trouble . . . That's all and i think it's something funky ^^" , but this is the first time that i've made one your comment please 
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10-01-2010, 09:35 PM
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Don't U like the poem
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10-15-2010, 12:23 AM
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It is good Thank you
I see you okay Sister Tranim
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10-15-2010, 01:12 PM
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Hi bro
It's really a great & very nice try but I think it's more proper to be called a song rather than a poem as the rhyme & the rythem are missing Thanks a lot & plz keep it up Ever 
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10-16-2010, 10:21 PM
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very cute try
I can not write a poem neither in arabic nor in english you are so brave to post your poem here ..... I salut you
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01-17-2011, 08:11 PM
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Nice try bro
Only one thing : I agree with my sis everlasting spring there is no rythem !! Anyways thanx for posting 
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