I Am" Poem"

HI GUYS
PLEASE ACCEPT MY FIRST POEM IN ENGLISH
I HOPE U LIKE IT

I AM A SADNESS
I WONDER IF I'M STILL A LIVE
I HEAR A BABY'S CRYIING SOUND
I SEE A PAINFUL SIGHT
I WANT TO BE THE HAPPIEST CHILD
I AM A SADNESS

I PRETEND TO LOVE
I FEEL LIKE A DEAD BODY WITHOUT ANY SENSE
I TOUCH THE SMILE
I WORRY ABOUT MY SMALL HEART
I CRY FOR MY CHILDHOOD
I AM A SADNESS

I UNDERSTAND THAT I WILL NEVER BE ALONE
I SAY THE TRUTH
I TRY TO BE HAPPY
I HOPE SMILING WITHOUT CRYING
I AM A SADNESS

what do u think

shahad

it is nice
thank you

I loved it
especially that part about touching the smile instead of experiencing it .. it is soooooo meaningful and deep

thank you honey

قلب الامارات

thnkx dear 4 ur replying
i hope u liked it

ظنــــــــــون

hi baby
i'm pleased that u loved it
i hope ur life is full of smile

thanx alote its really wonderful poem

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Your words are so sensitive
I liked so much
I wish read more and more about your words
Keep it up

زعل

thank u dear
nice 2 hear that u liked it

امـــــــل

عليكم السلام ورحمه

thank you sis 4 ur replying
i wish ur life is hopefull

wow!!
nice try .. and excellent begining
i think u can write more and more .. u r talented sis keep it up